My Shiny New Shoes

Join me today for 5 Minute Friday with The Gypsy Mama where we write for five minutes on a given topic. No editing. No criticism. No worry. Today’s topic is: New
 

I slid my feet in one at a time – into those polished, shiny new shoes, and my countenance became shiny, too.  So I walked around standing high and tall.  Those polished, shiny shoes made me new.

My head got too heavy as I held it up high, so there it fell. I leaned forward, and trip, trip, trip my polished, shiny, new shoes splashed in a puddle now stained with the look of old.

Now if only I get a new pair of polished, shiny shoes will all of these troubles fade away?

So off I prance on my toes holding my stained, muddy, old shoes in my hand.  Off to find the next pair to make me new again.
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12 responses to “My Shiny New Shoes”

  1. Hilary Avatar
    Hilary

    What a fun piece of writing! I enjoy how you play with words, and your take on new was so different from mine! I am excited to read more from you – and yes, I'll definitely check out your blog posts about singleness, too. I'm looking forward to it. Blessings!

  2. Beck Gambill Avatar
    Beck Gambill

    That's so often how we act! Looking for shiny anything to make us feel new, running from the deep work of inside renewing. I enjoyed visiting from 5 Minute Friday!

  3. Anonymous Avatar
    Anonymous

    Simple yet powerful!

    I can only post anonymously ~ weird.

    Jenn
    http://mothercoachrun.blogspot.com/2011/08/5-minute-friday-new.html

  4. bahava Avatar
    bahava

    sigh. so true. i often try to keep on looking for the next pair of new so that i can feel new.

  5. Theresa Miller Avatar
    Theresa Miller

    True. It's what we do. It's what we do without Jesus. I love the creative way you display that.

  6. BARBIE Avatar
    BARBIE

    Oh this is great! I too am guilty of trying to fit myself into something to make me feel new. But all I really have to do is put on Christ!

  7. Nics Cahill Avatar
    Nics Cahill

    Lovely words, and fun. Last week God gave me a word about walking in new shoes literally and metaphorically. Your post reminded me about it. Thank you. Happy Friday. Be Blessed Nics

  8. Jamie @ Six Bricks High Avatar
    Jamie @ Six Bricks High

    I've have been there – looking for the new thing to make me feel new. But that all too quickly fades and I'm left unsatisfied.

  9. thegypsymama Avatar
    thegypsymama

    Oh man, those shoes are just GORG!!!

  10. Maria Avatar
    Maria

    I sympathyze with everyone here when it comes to trying to fit myself into a new "new" to feel better at times. But thankfully the majority of the time I realize I do not need the new pair of shiny shoes.

    Maria @ Linen & Verbena

  11. Triple Braided Avatar
    Triple Braided

    Yes, it's awesome to get to that place of maturity in our faith!! We have the "shoes" that make us new – Jesus's!!

    Thank you for posting comments everyone!!

  12. Allison Avatar
    Allison

    Love this…we are always on the lookout for the next 'new' thing…can't seem to be satisfied with all He has blessed us with…

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